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THE CHEESEBURGER(SHORT SCREENPLAY)
By Victor Titimas
THE CHEESEBURGER(SHORT SCREENPLAY)
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Victor, I thought it was pretty good - could be tidied up a little, but the premise, is quite good, cheers.
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The format (the basic of the basics) is all wrong. You should read screenplays and learn how to format a screenplay, no professional will read this till then.