Zina, great self-promotion but what are you thoughts regarding Heidi's logline?

I'll go first. I think this is more of a synopsis than a logline. I would keep it short and sweet.

Something along the lines of;

After the Witch's Codex falls into the hands of a boy, a witch and her three friends set out to end the chaotic mess he creates.

Or something similar. Take it for what it is, just my opinion.

Sounds like a great story by the way.

Sounds interesting. You know, I am writing a fantasy too called "The Tree of Magic"

Good luck to you, Susan! And thank you everyone for the rates and comments.