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DARK SKY TERROR
By Gregg LeRoy Allen
Dark Sky Terror is the story about a swarm of deadly hornets invading a small town and starts killing everyone in sight, the town occupants face ultimate terror and a fight for survival.
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Hi, Gregg. I like the "town vs hornets" angle, but I think the logline needs to be reformatted. How about: "After a swarm of hornets invades a small town and starts killing everyone in sight, the residents fight for survival against the deadly insects."
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I would take the title out. Just get to the meat of the story to pull us in for a logline. Just my take haha
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