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NIGHT BUS
By Geoff Dupuy-Holder
When a troubled young woman boards a long-distance overnight bus, she doesn’t suspect her fellow passengers include not only vicious criminals on a heist – but also a murderous supernatural entity
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Brilliant idea with a unique twist on the heist genre. One piece of feedback: I’m not sure if just from the logline alone this would even need a supernatural element? You could easily remove this and have a solid heist thriller where the protagonist just happens to be in the wrong place at the wrong time / gets mistaken for a criminal and has to avoid being discovered? As it stands: a solid logline with a clever and enticing premise