Michael - Thanks for the invite. I scanned your screenplay. Check out the difference between V.O. and O.S. I think you may not be using them properly. It would be an easy correction. If I'm wrong, let me know and I can correct my scripts instead. Now that I have my stories down, the thing holding me back is formatting, so I figure, why not share the pain. Ha!

Hi Mark. Just saw this, thanks for the advise.

Michael, if a character is speaking off-camera, you use “O.S.” For narration etc. you use “V.O.” From a quick look at the screenplay, it does appear you've got them confused (this is very common, btw).