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THE LIGHTS BEFORE CHRISTMAS
By Lise Pyles
When a broke single mom accidentally destroys a Mexican-American single dad's livelihood, they pool resources to try to win a holiday lighting contest to save their kids' Christmas.
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Interesting concept, Lise Pyles! And fantastic title! I think the last part of your logline needs a better flow. It has "to" three times. Maybe "they pool resources to win a holiday lighting contest and save their kids' Christmas" or "they pool resources to win a holiday lighting contest so they can save their kids' Christmas."
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