In "Blue Heaven," a Rocky Mountain hotspot for police retirees, a half-Native detective must solve the bow and arrow murders of two infamous white cops before her city implodes in racial violence.
Really really intriguing start, Eric! I'm curious about what makes these white cops so "infamous" in the first place. Was much of their work as cops racially motivated & was that a well-known thing (thus leading to their murder)? If so, I wonder if you could make that clearer, ie: "...solve the bow and arrow murders of two notoriously racist white cops before her city implodes in violence."
Great logline and really cool premise! I'm not sure if it was intentional but you may have a typo in your logline (is it Blue Heaven or Blue Hell?) Oh, I see, the town is called Blue Heaven. Boy, do I feel stupid.
Personally, I like the "infamous" angle because it keeps me guessing. Were these cops on the take, did they mishandle a case, maybe sexual abuse or an accidental death? I think it would deflate a lot of the mystery if you were to come out and say why. But that's just my two cents.
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Really really intriguing start, Eric! I'm curious about what makes these white cops so "infamous" in the first place. Was much of their work as cops racially motivated & was that a well-known thing (thus leading to their murder)? If so, I wonder if you could make that clearer, ie: "...solve the bow and arrow murders of two notoriously racist white cops before her city implodes in violence."
But again, SUper good start!
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Great logline and really cool premise! I'm not sure if it was intentional but you may have a typo in your logline (is it Blue Heaven or Blue Hell?) Oh, I see, the town is called Blue Heaven. Boy, do I feel stupid.
Personally, I like the "infamous" angle because it keeps me guessing. Were these cops on the take, did they mishandle a case, maybe sexual abuse or an accidental death? I think it would deflate a lot of the mystery if you were to come out and say why. But that's just my two cents.
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