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DRONE COWBOY
By Gerard Thoolen
When a self employed drone pilot discovers that the real estate agent he recommended to his girlfriend, conned her into buying a house by using a false valuation report, he must make the felon pay back - or else her father, a powerful millionaire, will ruin his drone business and make their relationship impossible.
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thank you, Nathaniel!
Your logline is clear and concise. Has all the elements needed: description of the main character, who the opponent/rival/villain is and what his quest is. It also has high stakes for the self-employed, drone pilot.
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Thank you so much, Laurie!
new version: A childless female drone pilot, obsessively in love with her future husband, must take revenge on the real estate agent who robbed him - or else his mother, desperate for a grandchild, will refuse their marriage and ruin her drone company.