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HE'S THE BAD MAN
By Scott Whenman
SYNOPSIS:
Darren Hardy wants the best for his family: no more city life. He wants to bring his children up in a safe environment. The house they buy is perfect: it’s big, quiet, has lots of land and is far away from everything, hidden in the woods. It doesn’t stay quiet for long, as his children start seeing an old man trying to get into their bedrooms at night. Lucy, Darren’s daughter, makes friends with a very strange young girl that only she can see. The girl warns Lucy that her family will be in danger unless they move far away. When he moved his family, Darren didn’t know their new home held a dark secret. Everyone in the nearest town knew what had happened in the house, but none of them were brave enough to mention it. The further Georgie, Darren’s wife, delves into the house’s past, the more dangerous it becomes. The presence of an evil spirit still lingers on and is trying to snatch the children Who is The Bad Man and what does he want?
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Move should be moves. I'd delete "that comes for them." I think you need to give a bit more of a clue as to what the dark secret is.
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Thanks for the advice, James.
When a young family discovers their house is haunted, they must unearth a dark secret to destroy the evil spirit before it takes their children. (or possesses their children?)