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Betrayed and left for dead during a heist, Bree recovers and infiltrates the crime family that double-crossed her, determined to get her back pay.
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This sounds exciting, Sam. I really like the title and poster. I only have one suggestion for the logline: Change "Bree" to "_____________ (the protagonist with an adjective -- such as "a hardened criminal")."
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This sounds exciting, Sam. I really like the title and poster. I only have one suggestion for the logline: Change "Bree" to "_____________ (the protagonist with an adjective -- such as "a hardened criminal")."
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