good first try maybe research how to write a killer logline and write it and do not use slang words in your logline. Best

I get your point and thanks for your input but the slang BELONGS to that particular script. It's just one of my wild card scripts where " gritty tatty simplicity" and intellect merge. I " purposely" made it imperfect. It's a micro budget Dramaturgy non Ben Hur. I could cut out the emotion and put "A billionaire risks losing it all because he is shielding the mark of dangerous drug baron and only has a week to get her clean and on the plane." But then it's more like a higher budget plot. If it's low budget folk need bond with character instantly. I will add more log lines on this later, thanks, you got me thinking! Happy New Year!