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CLIPPER
By Kathy Panzella

GENRE: Action, Adventure
LOGLINE:

After the attack on Pearl Harbor, a rookie Pan Am navigator must fly around the world in a Clipper seaplane, a valuable war resource carrying secret cargo and a lady spy. Based on a true story.

PEARL HARBOR meets MEMPHIS BELLE. 

SYNOPSIS:

CLIPPER is based on the true story of an around-the-world flight by a Pan Am Clipper. On a routine Pacific flight, the radioman hears of the attack on Pearl Harbor. The Captain is ordered to bring the plane back. They survive tropical storms, mined harbors, and submarine torpedo attacks. A seductive spy, Nazi agents, and secret cargo complicate their struggle homeward. The young co-pilot saves the plane from destruction and the Captain finally comes home to his wife and children.

"...you never waste a scene. The characters in your story were well crafted. I must comment on your pacing, driving. You create a momentum that carried me through my first reading right to the last page. You have written a good story. Your action drives the story, but not at the cost to character participation. Always a good sign when an action story has room for characters with depth. Overall good work." Larry Myles, Red Inkworks

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