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SUCKING MANGOES NAKED
By Tad Wojnicki
An artist must win the Mango Art Show, or lose it all, including his model’s heart
SYNOPSIS:
WYATT arrives in Mango City, bent on entering the Mango Art Show. He meets his model, PIXIE, and her PAPA JOE. He joins a colorful tribe of lost souls struggling just like himself, to reinvent themselves by furiously painting a bigger, better American Dream, no matter what. He is fought by both his friends and enemies, including Papa Joe. His paintings intended for the show get destroyed. During a street skirmish, Papa Joe drops unconscious, but Wyatt saves his life. Out of her hidden spot, Pixie pulls out the naughtiest nude Wyatt has ever painted, titled, "Sucking Mangoes Naked." The painting wins the show.
SUCKING MANGOES NAKED
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Interesting title, caught my attention, but how would burning his picture end his dream in the first place.
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Hey guys, Stephen Boncella and James Drago, thanks for our insightful crits! I appreciate them! I wish let you know that I've just posted a re-done longline for SUCKING MANGOES NAKED (under the same title) so please, be so kind, and compare.
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