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SDRAWKCAB

SDRAWKCAB
By Victor Grippi

GENRE: Thriller, Sci-fi
LOGLINE:

A man and woman trapped in a motel room are forced to witness time running backwards as they relive their worst fears.

Nate Rymer

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Nate Rymer

Great concept Victor! I would suggest adding an adjective or two to your protagonists just to give them a bit if extra character/agency, and perhaps elaborate on the nature of their fears? For example:

'Waking up trapped in a motel room with no memory of how they got there, a desperate man and woman are forced to relive their deepest fears when they discover time is mysteriously moving backwards.'

Victor Grippi

Great suggestion Nate! I think I'll borrow from it if you don't mind. BTW, what do you think of the title?

Nate Rymer

No problem Victor! I personally found the title quite eye-catching :)

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