Great concept Victor! I would suggest adding an adjective or two to your protagonists just to give them a bit if extra character/agency, and perhaps elaborate on the nature of their fears? For example:
'Waking up trapped in a motel room with no memory of how they got there, a desperate man and woman are forced to relive their deepest fears when they discover time is mysteriously moving backwards.'
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Great concept Victor! I would suggest adding an adjective or two to your protagonists just to give them a bit if extra character/agency, and perhaps elaborate on the nature of their fears? For example:
'Waking up trapped in a motel room with no memory of how they got there, a desperate man and woman are forced to relive their deepest fears when they discover time is mysteriously moving backwards.'
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Great suggestion Nate! I think I'll borrow from it if you don't mind. BTW, what do you think of the title?
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No problem Victor! I personally found the title quite eye-catching :)