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SHRINKAGE
By Mo Yusuf

GENRE: Comedy
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A therapist, who specializes in one-time-only sessions instead of weekly appointments, tells her patients the cold, hard truth - whether they want to hear it or not.

SHRINKAGE

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Nathaniel Baker

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Karen "Kay" Ross

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Karen "Kay" Ross

OMG, I LOVE this concept! The rules totally set us up for what she's best at - telling the truth. I think what I'd love to see added is the complication, or how this strength is also a flaw and what she has to do to grow from this complication. And is she the protagonist? If so, what does she want? I can totally see this being a RomCom where her approach works professionally but does not work personally (she'd be a serial dater, forever single!). Keep at it - I love where this is going!

Mo Yusuf

Oh wow, appreciate the note Kay. Great pointers, thanks. Indeed she is the protagonist but not entirely how you see it ;-) I can send you the pilot if you'd like to have a read.

Mo Yusuf

Karen "Kay" Ross . I just realized you can @ people. LOL.

Judith Grace Bassat

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Jim Boston

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Rutger Oosterhoff

This could be fun!

Rutger Oosterhoff

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