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A losing career gamble forces a recent law school grad to balance a hectic personal and professional life against a “strings attached” living arrangement with his ex boyfriend.
SYNOPSIS:
As Jeremy Warrington is forced to move back in with an ex-boyfriend due to being suddenly disowned from his family, he suddenly becomes forced to deal with the possibility of unwanted feelings resurfacing while being reminded why they are exes to begin with. He does this while in between careers and meeting a new potential love interest with his own set of issues with work and love that could counter Jeremy's own ambitious plans.
I have posted an edited draft of my script for those who have already checked it out. I tried to correct all of the things you all have suggested. Thank you again for reading and enjoy.
I just posted another edit....Thanks again.