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A female Deputy Parole Officer and two federal agents are assigned to apprehend a completely unhinged psychotic parole violator. He turns the tables and goes after them instead with horrific unrelenting vengeance... then the unthinkable happens.
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GENRE: Crime/Suspense/Thriller
LOCATION: New York City
PAGES: 100
DESCRIPTION: Brutal. Dramatic. Frightening. Harrowing. Intense. Pulse Pounding. Scary. Terrifying. Unnerving.
FILM FESTIVAL WINS: 5
New York Deputy Parole Officer Erin Green is both a widow and single mother. She is assigned a top-priority case to apprehend a vicious, vile, and ultra-violent parole violator named Johnnie Carrillo, who has an Armani exterior with the personality of an automatic shotgun. Johnnie is as bad as they come, and his name strikes deep fear in those living in the dark seedy underbelly of New York City.
Erin teams up with a pair of seasoned DEA agents to hunt down Johnnie and apprehend him. However, thing go very bad, and take a very chilling and deadly turn when Johnnie turns the tables on Erin and the agents... and comes after them without mercy and unimaginable vengeance.
Erin and the agents suddenly find themselves as the hunted, and not only fighting for their survival, but their lives as well. When Johnnie then does the unthinkable, and kidnaps Erin's young daughter, things become incredibly dramatic, exceptionally harrowing, intense, and suspenseful.
Things come to an intense and ultra-terrifying conclusion when Erin comes face to face with Johnnie in a deadly game of cat and mouse to a fatal conclusion.
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Hi Mike, I think that this might read a little better: "A female Deputy Parole Officer and two Federal agents are assigned to apprehend an unhinged psychotic, before he turns the tables with horrific unrelenting vengeance."