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ACHILLES HEEL
By Alan Lee Blair

GENRE: Sci-fi, Thriller
LOGLINE: Even Superheroes have there wekanessesd

SYNOPSIS:

Achilles Heel If you had the chance to be better than average, what would you do with those powers? Ryan Advent is a less fortunate teen his mum has remarried and his step siblings are rude he relies on his friends to help but after making enemies with the school jock he decides it’s time to fight back. After few days of torture form the school hero he fights back but doesn’t have the advantage of the jock, and when Jason his best friend gets involved it all goes wrong. The jock wanting some money and drugs gives to Jason an ultimatum but Ryan intervenes and the whole day goes bad as they run away Ryan and the jock have a fight with Ryan losing then being knocked down and electrocuting himself. As he lies in a coma is family are distraught and the weeks go by where nothing can happen but a chance visit from long term love interest Carrie sparks a sensation in him Which revives him and he wakes up with extraordinary powers and decides to test them, he has strength that no other human can muster but after inflicting the pain on a car he realizes he has broken some bones while at the doctors he develops the ability to shoot a bolt of energy from his fingers. But with these powers he has a responsibility he saves the innocent from evil but with the attention he can’t reveal himself even to the girl he loves or his family who worry about him and will face the ultimate test of his friendship.. So if you had these powers how would you be? What would you do? Only Ryan knows what he would do but we all know that a power is a responsibility. With his ever growing population he gets the attention of the local crime syndicate, who will stop at nothing to be rid of him as he has ruined some of their businesses. Also the police would like to know who he is as they have some unanswered questions.

ACHILLES HEEL

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