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NICK THE DICK

NICK THE DICK
By G.Smokey Campbell

GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE: When White Supremacists disfigure his daughter a Black Detective in today’s Tinseltown battles Racists Cops, Loan Sharks, Hitmen and Demons as he seeks retribution. His secret weapon is his Jinn.
David Michael Kelly

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George Xanthidis

This sounds like a powerful and profound story. I hope I am not stepping on anyone's toes but I would change the logline a bit. I think something closer to this: would work even better "After a vicious attack against his daughter leaves her disfigured, Nick Wright, a scorned and brooding detective starts a fight with Loan Sharks, Hitmen, Demons, and the White Supremacist group responsible for the attack". Regardless, I would love to know more about the story of Nick Wright!

G.Smokey Campbell

George Xanthidis thank you for your comments.

Sam Iwata Aka Liu

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Sam Iwata Aka Liu

JINN wut?! WoW, you got me, I'm hooked! Wait a minute, you are the bar owner in Devil in a Blue Dress? What an honor, sir.

G.Smokey Campbell

@Sam Iwata…You honor me, sir and you are most kind.Thank you.

Jim Boston

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