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when two sisters lose their parents in an auto accident. the older sister has a deep secret that will set the family in turmoil.
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When two sisters lose their parents in an auto accident....
Take it from there Charlotte.
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Your title and logline reminds me of a calypso song from my youth,
Lyrics: Shame and scandal in the family. The boy discusses with his parents separately; his intent to marry.
FATHER: The girl is your sister but your momma don't know.
MOTHER: Your daddy ain't your daddy, but your daddy doesn't know.
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When two sisters lose their parents in an auto accident....
Take it from there Charlotte.
If the story has nothing to do with sass, this might not be an ideal character sketch. Try to avoid cliches "low and behold"
Never include numerals to age.
Your title and logline reminds me of a calypso song from my youth,
Lyrics: Shame and scandal in the family. The boy discusses with his parents separately; his intent to marry.
FATHER: The girl is your sister but your momma don't know.
MOTHER: Your daddy ain't your daddy, but your daddy doesn't know.
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