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THE PONY NO ONE COULD RIDE
By Gary R. Winstead
What happens when a poor cowboy is given a pony for his son's 10th birthday, could there possibly be a problem with a free pony, right
SYNOPSIS:
When the Wilson Family gets a free pony for their 10 year old son they think it is the beginning of a great adventure. They soon realize that anything free comes with a price. Will young Billy be up to the task?
THE PONY NO ONE COULD RIDE
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