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When archaeology students find the crypt of an immortal sorcerer and extract from his skeleton a magical amulet that kills the living and resurrects the dead, they have to escape from the terrible revenge of the immortal sorcerer.
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Archaeology students find the crypt of an immortal sorcerer and take from his skeleton a magical amulet that kills the living and resurrects the dead. However, while studying the remains, the students damage the shackles that restrained the sorcerer and he goes after them to return the amulet to himself. And in order to protect the magical power from being destroyed by sunlight, the sorcerer covers his bones with the alien flesh of people who meet him on the way.
To escape from the vengeance of the immortal sorcerer, archaeology students must decipher the ancient tale of the immortal sorcerer Koschei the Deathless in order to find and break the needle at the end of which his death is stored.
The mystical terminator. Although the plot has nothing in common.
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Hello Arthur. It sounds like a really intriguing, interesting and original story. Only the logline is a bit too long. Here's a suggestion: "When archaeology students find the crypt of an immortal sorcerer and take from his skeleton a magical amulet that kills the living and resurrects the dead, they now have to escape the terrible vengeance of the immortal sorcerer." All other details can be in the synopsis.
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Marcos Fizzotti, thank you very much. I think your option is perfect.
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You're welcome, Arthur.
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