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THIS IS MY ASTEROID!
By Arthur Charpentier
To save her father's artel from ruin, a brave girl space geologist hijacks a spaceship to find a platinum asteroid in another star system. But she crashes and is captured by a hostile aborigine. The heroine will have to find a way to escape from captivity and return home with a valuable asteroid.
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The script is written in Russian!
THIS IS MY ASTEROID!
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Why does the aborigine ‘capture’ the heroine? Why won’t the aborigine let her leave?
@Rose Scott
The aborigine serves as a border guard and guards his territory. in addition, the aborigines are hostile to earthlings.
If the aborigine is just following orders then it isn’t the aborigine she must escape from. It is the one who created the rule in the first place. Why did that lead aborigine create such a rule? The hostility to earthlings must come from somewhere? The logline should give at least a hint,