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THE DEVIL'S DIARY
By Lee Taylor
After a woman takes a book that collects souls, she becomes haunted by a mysterious man who wants it back. But if he gets it will her soul end up inside it?
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A woman steals a book from an old bookstore but is left shocked after seeing images of tortured souls inside it. The images disappear, leaving the pages empty for new souls. Whoever looks inside the book will die horrifically and end up as an image, but can the woman get rid of the book before the Devil returns to reclaim it?
THE DEVIL'S DIARY
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That's a 10 star title, the Logline is not a Logline, it's a short synopsis... but it reads better and presents a better picture of what this story could be than the synopsis does. The Devils Diary title is beyond awesome though!
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Original idea with a cool title and cool hook, although the logline is a too long. Try to keep it under 30 words.
Hello everyone, thanks for the advice about the logline. I'm still learning, doing everything on my own I have to learn as I go, including scriptwriting, novels etc.....but I think I have cool ideas for movies. Just need someone to believe in me........Written the first 26 pages, so am on the look out for readers, feedback.......
I will read . Can you send the first 10 pages. But give me some time. Feeling a bit tired lately. roosterhofff@zonnet.nl
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