THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES

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THE MIDDLE OF 8

THE MIDDLE OF 8
By Shelly Spotleson Sinclair

GENRE: Thriller, Crime
LOGLINE:

An injured detective must find the courage to return to duty with her K-9 partner and continue a deadly game with a madman.

Donnalyn Vojta

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Donnalyn Vojta

Hi, Shelly. this is pretty good. I'm intrigued, but for loglines, there is a specific formula industry readers like to see. For this one, you don't really need "find the courage." That's a mental/emotional factor rather than a visual/action component. The producers prefer the latter. So, maybe something like, "An injured detective must return to duty with her K-partner and continue a deadly pursuit of a madman before ____ happens." This is just a jumping-off point. I think you get the picture.

Shelly Spotleson Sinclair

Thank you, Donnalyn. I shall work on that. Appreciate the comment.

Tasha Lewis

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