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“Open Mike” is a Romantic Comedy about the waning days of the pop punk band “The Carps”. Mike Carpowski finds himself as a failed transplant in Los Angeles and returns to a middle of no where hometown in hopes of a career change. All that was bad changes for good in this accidental success story that includes the three greatest joys in life; love, success and ice cream.
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Hi Tim, logline needs to get down to 35 words ideally. May I suggest something like this...
Mike Carpowski is down-on-his-luck; with the glory days of his punk band coming to an end, he has nowhere left to go but back to his sleepy hometown; only to find the best days of his life are yet to come. [41 words] ??? Will try to do better...
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