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Shaun Goldsmith

THE RING KEEPER
By Shaun Goldsmith

GENRE: Thriller
LOGLINE: A story about a man held captive by a woman who believes him to be the serial killer who murdered her sister years ago and that she intends to kill him in one hour if he does not confess to the crime.

SYNOPSIS:

  • A feature length film with two characters. - A one location shoot for a micro budget. - Ideal for a small crew and a short shoot. - Currently in development
Steve O'Brien

i could play the captive man

Steve O'Brien
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you could shoot it from two locations( NY and Canada). i could be held in a cell like room on a TV screen and she could be at a separate location while she puts me on trial. My sentence could be administered by her at the push of a button as I plead for her not to do it. It's easier for her to do it if Im not physically there...just my thoughts....peace

Cedar Woods

This sounds like it could go somewhere. I think you should research proper psychological terms and all. Also why not make it be in real time? What I mean is: First 30 minutes = Searching for the guy Next 60 minutes = Interrogating the guy (along with flashbacks that make us wonder if he really is the killer) Last 30 minutes = A shocking twist of some sort (perhaps he's not the real killer, and now they have to stop the true murderer) Just a thought

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