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A chance meeting between a street-smart, female fire breather and a wealthy black teenager running an illegal scam sparks a night of understanding, acceptance, and a brutal burning. Short script and pilot.
- Outstanding Short Script at Sacramento International Film Festival
- Official Selection, Scriptwriters & Co UK Table Read
- Semi-Finalist, Scriptwriters & Co International Film Festival
SYNOPSIS:
JESSIE, a street-smart fire breather on Venice Beach, knows how to work a crowd. CAROL, her 50+ grifter foster mom, just sees a money-making teenager who needs her to stay out of a state home. ADAM, a wealthy bookworm with an illegal side hustle, meets them both after running from a scam gone wrong.
Jessie and Adam strike up a free flow of an evening, that culminates back at Jessie's broken down car with Carol interrupting any romance -- as she spirals the evening into a brutal burning and mother-daughter dynamics gone terribly wrong.
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