Hey there, Brad. Thanks for the feedback. You're right, I think I will simply add that it is the rookie that returns. Hopefully that small add-in will make a big difference. Thanks again!

thanks for sending me the link for that. it sounds really intriguing. The logline might need a little work. I was recently contacted by Brandi Self, who also offered her services, here on Stage 32, to help me doctor my loglines a bit, so maybe she's worth contacting. Let me know if that helps. Sounds like it would make an entertaining film.