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SINS OF THE PAST
By John D Clay
Female who journeys through her past to find more dark secrets
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concept from euroscript Neo noir course jan 2018 British and US Noir from 1947 - 64 (October man / 3rd secret) and the USA influence around 1973 - 1981...
SINS OF THE PAST
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http://www.euroscript.co.uk/neo-noir-and-the-dark-thriller.html?utm_source=Euroscript+vouchers+for+Christmas+&utm_campaign=CHRISTMAS+PRESENT+IDEA&utm_medium=email
http://www.euroscript.co.uk/blog/seven-things-you-need-to-know-about-neo-noir?utm_source=7+Things+About+Neo+Noir+January+2018&utm_campaign=NEO+NOIR+JANUARY+2018&utm_medium=email
http://jacksharman.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/Raymond-Chandler-Simple-Art-of-Murder.pdf
Redrafting after workshop complete.
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additional input after neo noir workshop (31st) 10 - 5pm.
developing the role and ending of the film after noir workshop.
backstop and flashback to integrate shortly.
addressing marketability of concept during Script reading course.
adding In some of Lucy hay's 10 page advice from script reading course.
revising Genre abit from insight from L Hay;s script reading course.
reexamining marketable along with the contact https://shootingpeople.org/production/work/project/13234