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SYNOPSIS:
a business man experiences a freudian dream and journeys through a rite of passage along the way, 28 min expefrimental short digging to freduian sex and other darker human themes (18 cert) main antagonist / love interest - https://shootingpeople.org/production/work/cast/role/33588
Int. Dream - Day Sam (early 30s) businessman is walking through a cloudly white surreal space. SOPHIE (30s_) blonde / redhead approaches him, in elaborate costume. ...
SOME OF WHICH WILL BE A HOMAGE BACK TO SOME OF THE EARLY 1970S films LIKE Breezy
3 key location smokey corridor, hotel room and toliet.
https://shootingpeople.org/production/work/cast/role/33588
https://shootingpeople.org/production/work/crew/role/33622
Int. Hotel Room - Day
a Large luxuary room engulfs, Sophie enters from bathroom, and sits on the bed (far end of room) she is dressed in seductive lugerie. Sam enters.
Sam POV:
SAM
You look a real knockout.
SOPHIE
Here to please,
SAM
(more
would you ...
SOPHIE
What you're see will blow your mind!
Sophie starts undressing ....
https://shootingpeople.org/production/work/cast/role/33658
Sophie
(grouns)
You want all the juicy bits