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CARLOS' CONFESSION
By Shawn Rohrbach
A homeless young man seeks the comfort of an air conditioned Catholic Church to get out of the sweltering heat. To prolong his visit, he goes to confession and weaves long, fantastical tales of his supposed sins to the irritation of the inexperienced priest. 15 pages.
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Gosh that sounds cute. Maybe you should rework it for a established TV show. I am still too lazy to read it but I feel free to give advice.