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When a young woman investigates the covered-up murder of her sister, she teams up with a private eye and a cast of supporting characters to find the killer.
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“The Whispers in the Woods” is the story of a young woman who embarks on a journey to solve the mystery of the killer of her best friend who was a Hollywood actress. As the story unfolds and the mystery of the killer becomes more apparent, our protagonist is taken on whirlwind of a rollercoaster ride throughout Los Angeles as she is forced to face her fears and inner secrets.
“The Whispers in the Woods” is an action-packed, psychological, mystery thriller that will keep audiences on the edge of their seats and guessing what will happen next.
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Looks amazing Anthony McBride and HAPPY HEW YEAR!!
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Sounds interesting, Anthony McBride, but I think you need something stronger than "a cast of supporting characters" in the logline. And I suggest adding a ticking clock at the end of the logline if there's one in the story. Something like "find the killer before he/she ________"
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Thanks everybody for taking time to read this and your input...
You're welcome, Anthony McBride.
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