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An idealistic doctor and a high-strung prison governor clash during an experimental trial casting inmates as 'cuddlers' for premature and abandoned babies, leading to chaotic tragedy as the experiment spirals out of control.
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This is a really intriguing concept! What is the tone? (or tonal comps)
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Thanks Emily! Not sure on comps yet, but I envision this as a mockumentary-style concept with doses of flippant gallows humour mixed in with the humanity and chaos.
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Sounds nuts, I like it!
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Why is it quarantined?
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Hi Wendy, thanks for the rating! I had the idea of making the hospital quarantined by a viral outbreak, so it wouldn't make sense for just ordinary members of the public to be drafted for the experimental trial. I will tinker with the story mechanics on this though :)
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Thank you Arthur! :)
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Thanks Zach, appreciate the rating :)
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Thanks Dartel! :)