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DUSK IN THE RUINS
By Nate Rymer
In a vast mountain floating through the seas, a young restless eagle's horrific discovery of his community's immortal origins leads him to challenge their delicate social order, unleashing violent chaos in the process. THE SECRET OF NIMH meets JOKER meets ANNIHILATION.
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