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After her marriage and business fall apart, Evelyn Dooley (30s) runs away to Ireland to live with her sister, where she meets Danny (30s), a handsome local musician. As they work together to revive a local music venue, sparks fly and Evelyn finds her new love of music…and the musician.
Co-Written by Amber Karlins
SYNOPSIS:
When Evelyn Dooley (From Boston, MA) married her high-school sweetheart, James, she thought she was set for life. Now she’s thirty, single, and fleeing to Dublin Ireland to live with her sister for a fresh start.
Then a chance encounter with gorgeous musician Danny leads to an unlikely friendship, and soon the pair are running music nights together in one of the oldest pubs in Dublin. For the first time Evelyn is following her dreams rather than someone else’s – and sparks are beginning to fly between her and Danny…
But when her savings runs out and home beckons, Evelyn has to choose. The safe, comfortable life she left behind, or a new adventure with Danny? Will Evelyn flee back to the familiarity of her ex, or reach for the stars and take a leap into the unknown?
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The story is interesting, Kat Green. I think the logline can be smoother.
How about: After her marriage and business fall apart, a _______ (her adjective) businesswoman runs away to Ireland to live with her sister, where she meets a handsome local musician. As they work together to revive a music venue, she falls in love with music... and the musician.