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SYNOPSIS:
A time-travelling FBI Agent alters the circumstances of his own birth, waking the next day a completely different person. Fate intervenes, pairing him with his old FBI partner. Together they must race to stop a demented assassin, whose origins stem from the very same FBI operation.
Thanks. Nope, just once. His mother was dating a victim of the serial killer first, and she only began dating his original father after the first boyfriend's death.
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