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BORROWED TIME
By Jeff Naparstek

GENRE: Drama
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A man has a vivid dream that he's going to die in thirty days.  He's not sure if acting on his premonition will prevent his fate... or cause it.

Jay Johnson

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James Barber

Only question I have that may make me more likely to view it is to know something about the "man". What is his job, is he old or young, married, divorced. Something to tease me while only adding in two or three descriptors. When a well to do accountant has a vivid dream that he will die in thirty days...

James Barber

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Beth Turnage

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Beth Turnage

James is right. But also I'd delete the "He's not sure" words. Use a direct word and lose the ellipsis. Will acting on his premonition prevent his fate or cause it?

James Drago

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