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When a woman believes a killer is hunting her family again, she flees with her nine-year-old daughter and elderly mother. But soon finds the killer she tries to outrun, already possesses one of them.
SYNOPSIS:
Barbara Jane believes her family is being hunted by a killer who has hunted them before.
She takes her nine-year-old daughter, and eighty-year-old mother and hits the road.
But it seems th killer is close behind, leaving bloody fingerprints on the hatchback of the Volvo station wagon.
The running takes it's toll till the party can go no further.
But like a dormant disease wating to metastasize, the killer draws closer and closer before striking and possessing the body of the most vulnerable of the travelers.
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I have trouble with writing up synopsis and log lines for Shorts. I agree, it is definitely just a tag line. I will work on this over the weekend and see if I can get a solid log line put together. Good call, Phil. Thank you!
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Pleasure, Mike.
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LOVE IT!!!!!
Love the support, Nathaniel!!