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In a dimly lit room, a young man paces back and forth, delivering a powerful monologue filled with anger and emotion. He accuses the tied up, wounded man sitting in a chair before him of causing harm to someone close to his heart, a girl. As the young man continues his poignant speech and wielding a knife, the truth is slowly uncovered. The two are actually one and the same, and as the words reach the end, the young man stabs the wounded version of himself, leaving only one person to lay dying on the floor, surrounded by the remnants of his shattered soul.
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