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WHAT MONEY CAN'T BUY
By Jesse Prevost
Two small time idiots on the run from the law discover they're in possession of a duffel bag full of cash and wind up holding a group of mall security guards hostage while they hatch an escape plan.
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This sounds like it's gonna be hilarious, Jesse Prevost.
I think the logline needs a little work (just a little). Something like: "After coming into possession of a duffel bag full of cash, two small-time idiots on the run from the law hold a group of mall guards hostage while hatching an escape plan."
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Maurice Vaughan I appreciate the feedback! I actually like that! You mins if I use it?
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No problem, Jesse Prevost. You're welcome to use it.
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You had me at "idiots." LOL
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