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THE PICKLE HUT
By Mark S Reynolds
The wicked dethroned best pickle champion and her deviant granddaughters plot against the sweet young woman that took her coveted title.
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what is a pickle champion? Best tasting? Best selling? Faster eater? Or something raunchy? What is so great about getting the title? And what happens if they don't get it. I think this is a great start, but I would add in more of stakes or where the comedy is coming from.
Thanks again! Good to have other eyes on these...
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