THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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By Travis Sharp
An African-American, thirty something, war veteran takes a life changing road trip with his Caucasian, Vietnam veteran, AA sponsor and finds clarity regarding his inner demons.
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I suggest you research what goes into a logline and try again. Good first try though, just not a logline. What, Why, When, How!
Amazing Kacee this is not my first rodeo, the logline is simple because the story is simple. I genuinely don’t think your comment was meant to be condescending ,but it is.