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TRUMAN SHOW DELUSION
By Rutger Oosterhoff
When five stand-up comedians sufferering from TSDÂ suddenly can't get gigs they team up to bring to justice the culprits who make their lives a living hell.
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Choose life! Choose a job. Choose a starter home. Choose dental insurance, leisurewear, and matching luggage. Chooseo read the pitch doc of this unscripted tv show called the "Truman Show Delusion."
Enjoy!
TRUMAN SHOW DELUSION
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I would change "TSD" to "Truman Show Delusion," Rutger Oosterhoff. At first I was like, "What's TSD?"
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Yes, maybe Maurice, I just changed Truman Show Delusion to TSD to make the logline shorter and easier to read. I'm gambling on the fact that TSD is spelled out in the title right now and the two go hand in hand. Can always change back.
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Thanks for rating guys!
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You're welcome, Rutger Oosterhoff. "TSD" might be ok. And yeah, you can always change it back.
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Thanks Tasha!
Thanks for rating Nate!
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Hey David, I was thinking of your question. Maybe you can check out google, and type: "(unscripted) reality show contentes / and or templates. I think my show has all the basic standard points to discus, but it it lack a CLEAR THEME and DAY TO DAY ACTIVITIES RELATED TO IT -- It's there but (by far) not good enough. I feel making a good reality show is even harder than making a good feature script. Hope you're well, Rutger
... Maybe you can ask Maurice for a few tips.