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PARTIAL DISCRETION
By Vic Burns

GENRE: Independent
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A loving couple wrongly suspect each other of cheating and unknowingly hire the same private detective.

Christine Capone

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Christine Capone

This sounds interesting. I like the premise.

Christine Capone

Did you complete the screenplay? I'm curious as to how you made the story work. Are they married? If so, did she keep her maiden name and they're separated?? Does the PI know that they are a couple?

Vic Burns

Thanks Christine. I got around 40 pages in and hit a wall. That story is now part of a detective series pilot ‘Renshaw’ that I’ve currently got my teeth into.

I’d like to finish it as a feature too though, just to see where it goes.

Nathaniel Baker

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