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A woman with a killer's instinct is taken under the wings of an international assassin, but her erratic behavior may land the both of them in body bags.
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Clara Hunter lives a boring life in corporate America. But she has a killer’s instinct, which catches the eye of international assassin Sebastian Bolo.
He plans to retire and aims to use for his benefit… but her erratic behavior may land both of them in body bags.
Great start but I would just lose the ellipsis.
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