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In a world where demons and ghosts can invade the human world, mankind has a protector: Catrina. However, when a mission goes wrong, she gives her power to a dorkly but kind hearted young girl to save the day. Now, they must work together to maintain their world safe, while the new Catrina learns everything from the former one.
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Does "while being a beacon of hope" refer to the girl or the guardian, Julio Torres?
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Thanks for the feedback! I changed the logline a little bit, hope its better than the previous one!
I think this new logline sounds like a short synopsis also, Julio. See my comment on your other logline.
Katrina gives all her strength to another girl? I don't understand this situation.