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THE DEVIL'S HOLE
By James Musselman
An ambitious young American geologist and her small team of miners are trapped two miles underground in a remote Russian mine with a flesh-eating alien that they unknowingly unleashed from the impact meteor it was hiding in.
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Drop the "The"... on the movie poster the title works better as "Devil's Hole" ...less is more. I'd drop the "There Is No Escape" 1. it's cliche, and 2. did I mention less is more? Also, if it were me, I'd re-write the poster catch line to: "Trapped two miles in the earth with an un-earthly horror" but that's just me. I want to buy a ticket right now!