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An Italian restauranteur struggles to maintain the business of family that he inherits overnight, keeping it together better than any mobster ever could, else he loses them all.
SYNOPSIS:
Cowritten with my brother.
This is our first attempt at family comedy drama.
The logline is intentionally misleading.
I apologize for the cliche and cheese.
Don't let the logline fool you. It's not a ganster movie. The only mob you'' find in this story is the mob of lovable children. They will make you laugh and cry.
Chris a restaurateur, the last single sibling in the family.
Will he ever get marry, get a girlfriend, or maybe even a pet?
Sudden over night, he inherits 9 kids. Since all his siblings and inlaws
bequeath him as godfather to their children. Due to a tragic accident, all the
kids' parents are presumed while dead on a vacation.
The favorite uncle in the family must pull it together in order to keep the family
together. He fails and succeeds in his trials and tribulation. Chris along with his
nieces and nephews battle child protective services, bullies, and snakes.
Laugh, giggle, and cry. You will cry. Merry Christmas y'all!
Paints a decent picture of a story, but perhaps introduce some form of conflict or obstacle within this longline.
Thanks Al Lex Xander, (one of my character)
"An Italian restaurateur struggles up to maintain the business of family that he inherits overnight, keeping it together better than any mobster ever could, else he loses them all."