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A former social worker disillusioned with the system, but not with the children, takes in foster children who have run out of options.
(Miss Winn's Garden is a dramatic series, with comedic overtone, that explores real-life problems and situations faced by foster parents, foster children, social workers, and families.)
Pilot, treatments for next six episodes of first season (co-written by Lucy A. Fazely and Chris Bieszk), and series bible available.
SYNOPSIS:
Miss Winn tends to her garden of foster children, humanity's forgotten seedlings. They are disposable, tossed aside and left to wither away. Miss Winn patiently teaches her charges to care for something other than themselves, a plant as pathetic as their own lives. As with all gardens, despite the best intentions of the gardener, not every seed grows to maturity.
A dramatic series, with comedic overtone, that explores real-life problems and situations faced by foster parents, foster children, social workers and families.
Set in Miss Winn’s suburban home, the Foster Care Agency, the school, outdoors as well as other locations as needed.
TONE
Serious family drama exploring the tensions and conflicts of troubled foster children forced to live
together. Situations and complications are grounded in real-life discords between the foster mother, the children, the foster care system, social workers,
therapists, the legal system, her family and friends
as well as interference from biological families.
Themes Explored:
Family is what you make of it.
Love and family are not constrained by blood lines.
Personal Responsibility.
Each individual must learn first how to care for themselves before they can
be a responsible person in society.
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